Soul

First the good: Her pose is very good and a good choice for her hair as well. I love the texture on her t-shirt. The skirt texture is very pretty and the jewelry is good for her character. Also, while I'm not personally a fan of skin ink, her lion tattoo does fit the character very well. However, the best thing about this pic is the background. No, I'm not damning with faint praise. It makes the whole thing vibrant and alive.

My two main problems with the character are her face and skin texture. The face is not very expressive- it almost looks like it's a default pose. And the shape seems wrong for the character. As for the skin, it has a sickly pallor that does not fit well with what I think you were after. Something darker would have worked.